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In a Dark Place (2006)
IMDB rating: 4.40
Plot: She thought she was their Guardian Angel, but was she really their Nanny from Hell? A chilling modern ghost story, inspired by a classic of the genre, In A Dark Place is the suspenseful, erotic story of a young woman fighting to redeem the souls of two children seduced by dark influences beyond the grave. Anna Veigh, a recently qualified art therapist and teacher, is finding work at her inner city special school a tougher psychological challenge than she can cope with. The offer of a new post minding two wealthy young orphans whilst their wealthy uncle is away on business seems a perfect escape for her. It is a welcome escape. Her new workplace is Bly House, a remote country estate with beautiful grounds and a small resident staff. Miles and Flora, the children, seem sweet and charming, if a little strange, and Anna thinks that she has really “landed on her feet” after the rigors of her previous job. The only fly in the ointment is the frosty estate manager, Miss Grose, who seems remote and unfriendly to the new arrival. Very soon, moreover, Anna makes disquieting discoveries. Miles, the boy, has been expelled from his school, for a sin so dreadful the headmaster will not even discuss it. Anna then learns that her predecessor in the job, one Miss Jessel, died in suspicious circumstances. To add to her unease, she begins to catch glimpses of unknown sinister figures lurking in the grounds, but nobody else admits to seeing them. Anna confronts the Miss Grose with her suspicions about these intruders, but is surprised by the force of Miss Grose’s reaction. The figures Anna describes are unmistakably those of two ex-employees at the house. The only problem is that these employees are dead. Anna senses that the ghostly manifestations are malevolent in their intent. Not only is the psychological welfare of the children in very real jeopardy, but their lives and their souls are also at risk. But Anna is forced to confront dark secrets buried deep in her own psyche as she fights to cleanse the children’s souls of darkness, with terrifying consequences for all concerned.
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Directors: Rotunno Donato
Actors: Olson Christian,Pountney Graham,Fox Jonathan,Sanne Thomas,Schimdt Jean,Ristic Patrice,Schroeder Paul,Bearne Chris,Drama,Horror,Mystery,Thriller,
What's your opinion on this idea of my added character to twilight Jasmin Cullen?
Hi it’s me again ,and I’m just posting another little story idea about my added character to twilight (Jasmin Cullen).On my last story idea I had a few comments saying that I had run-on sentences
,or misused commas or tense changes ,something that isn’t so easy to catch ,but if you couldn’t tell
I’m just a minor so I haven’t exactly learned every grammar rule in the world. Let alone mastered them all,and I’m not trying to be some magnificent writer or anything ;I’m merely just a girl with an idea who’s just wondering if you all like the idea of my character .So if you would , when you comment please talk to me about the idea ,if it’s good then I’ll fix the grammar ,but if it isn’t then there’s no need .So please don’t be mad or anything I just want you all to understand why I would of made the mistakes that I’ve made ,I will admit that some are careless but some are just made because I haven’t learned them yet.Regardless I’ll try to do the best I can ,maybe it would help if you looked at it as if someone was telling you about it ,but once again if you would please give me your opinion on" Jasmin Cullen" then I promise I’ll get my dad or cousin to edit my work first before I post it .So with that said Here’s another idea of mine about Jasmin Cullen.This one was said to be interesting (by friends) it’s when she meets the rest of the family(Emmett,Alice ,Jasper,and Rosealie) and she has a nightmare ,and she discusses her thirst with her new father Edward and lots more so I hope it intrigues you !
Overview of what happened so far : Jasmin found her home that she was looking for .Of course she wouldn’t find a perfect little brady bunch family ,had a vampire family to love which was worth so much more to her .
New section ~Found Home Pt1 ~
setting~ first week of summer ,first day being half vampire , one A.M., at the Cullens house
Character update ~Myanlandria (Mya for short )is Jasmin’s spirit guardian a black cat that can shape
shift into any type of jungle or house cat ;she can breath fire,talk, run at the speed of light ,and do things with her mind .She’s over a thousand years old ,and has to stay with Jasmin where ever she goes .
Jasmin Age10~
I was laying on the couch , my head in Esme’s lap with my feet on Edward I glimse over at Carlisle,
he and Mya were getting aquainted with each other .Half asleep I looked at the clock that was mounted over top the fire place ,it said one A.M. , I yawned once then Esme glances down at me
"Oh! Youre’ bed!" she announced abruptly my eyes poped opened by her unexpected outburst ,
I sat up ,and shifted over and laid on Edward .Esme zoomed up the stairs ,and in two seconds she was back saying"Alright sweetheart you may come up now ."I feel Edward then scoop me up in his arms and and start to carry me up the stairs ."Goodnite !" Carlisle and mya said ,but I was too sleepy to reply so I just waved .He takes me up to ,what I’m guessing ,is his room . .there wasn’t a bed ,but there was a couch that pulled out into a bed .I laughed at the pink, flower comforter
and sheets on it, thinking that Esme must of gotten them while Edward and I were gone.He laid me on the couch/bed they both gave me a kiss on the forehead then left ,I was still too sleepy to reply so I just blew them an air kiss. It didn’t take me too long to drift off to sleep ,and when I did I dreamt of my new family and I.We were in an open field when . . there was a sudden chill in the air ,and the sky turned black ,and a dark crow with red eyes flew in front of the sun and it started to devour anything, and everything in it’s path we were running as fast as we could ,but it wouldn’t stop I’d reach out to someone and the crow would just destroy them .I screamed in terror "Jasmin!" ,"Jasmin!" someone called my name, I looked around but I didn’t see anyone just me and the horrifying bird,my heart started beating faster ,my breathing quickened "Jasmin!" it was getting closer and closer "Jasmin !Jasmin—–n!" . . .I opened my eyes to be in Edwards grip and surrounded by everyone ,they all sighed in relief ,I guess, "Darling are you alright ?" Carlisle asked. I didn’t reply right away I sighed in relief myself once I figured out that I was dreaming "It-it was only a dream? . .But it seemed so real."
I stuttered "You-you were screaming ,and-and we didn’t know if or what was wrong ."Esme panicked.
I looked at Edward who was gripping me by the arms then I replied "Ya . .um. I’m ok it just freaked me out I guess ."I replied .I was a little bit confused but mostly relieved "Would you like to talk about it ?" Carlisle asked ,intrigued all the sudden .I thought for a moment "I-I don’t even remember it ." I whispered
"Are you sure you’re alright though ?" Edward asked with a stern tone. "Um . .
ya I’m fine ." I reassured him .I smiled ,
they uneasily smiled back ,then gave me a hug and kiss then left except Edward whom was still in the room he wasn’t convinced "Are you sure ?" he asked again he was reading my mind I really wasn’t sure .Because I’ve never had a nightmare ;not for a long time anyway ."Well if it would make you feel better you could stay in here with me . .just to make sure I don’t have another nightmare." I said knowing that I wanted him to ; I didn’t want to be alone.
He smirked then zoomed over to the left side of me on the couch he rapped one arm around me then I buried my self into
his side .I started to drift off to sleep again ,but it was much better ,very peaceful ,calming to me .The next mornig I woke up because I could feel the light shining through from the blinds
in the window .I peeked an eye open to see Edward,and Esme staring at me ;I
laughed ". .Googmorning."
ok so there’s the first half of this new section, please tell what you think
Oh! and mya belongs she goes along with Jasmin .She’s in the first two ideas that I’ve had if you still don’t like her fine but if you do go to my page and you’ll see a more in depth description of her
( in my questions)
I was so distracted by your punctuation I couldn’t even read it.
When you use comma’s you don’t put a space before you use one. Doing a comma like so, is correct. Doing one like this , is wrong. Same thing goes with semi-colons.
When you’re ending a sentence with a period, it is next to the last letter of ending sentence. Then there are two spaces before you start your next sentence.
Also, the idea of bringing some mystical cat into an already established story that you’re trying to add to is just a bad idea. If you want to write a fan fiction by adding another vampire to the Cullen clan, fantastic; have fun with it. But to add some magical, fire breathing cat into the mix is just a really bad idea. I’d completely remove it if I were you.
The Doctor | Dec 30, 2009
Yeah, go ahead and just read real fiction. Taking someone else’s ideas and dumping your infantile fantasies onto them isn’t productive, and no one will want to read this.
Furthermore, punctuation isn’t some form of advanced grammar. Most 1st graders understand that punctuation goes right after the word, like this, and not inexplicably spaced afterwards.
I hope your teachers are ashamed.
Your parents, presumably, are dead.
hey_you_in_the_bushes | Dec 30, 2009
